Feedback on pitch

 

I was pleased with how my pitch went and the feedback that I received. For intertextuality I am thinking about having my cover star for cover 1 wearing an outfit inspired by Britney Spears’ iconic denim outfit from the 2011 AMA’s but with darker makeup to emphasise the idea of 90s/2000s pop reimagined, as well as cover lines with intertextual references of her songs such as ‘Oops I did it again’ being used for an article about the music industry taking inspiration from earlier eras. For cover 2 I am now considering including a cover line reference to the Charli XCX lyric ‘Von Dutch, cult classic, but I still pop’ with the brand ‘Von Dutch’ being popularised in the early 2000s and the lyric perhaps referencing how pop music today should be more like it was in the 2000s when it wasn’t so serious and was fun to listen to.

I may include a qr code to my website in the magazine as well as the usernames of other platforms in the print and online versions. In regards to a vinyl giveaway competition, I will mention how to apply through the website in the print version as well as where on the website the form is for audiences to write their concert reviews online.